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So, what happened?

To be honest, I'm not sure.

But I'm pretty sure it has something to do with both high standard of art I'm holding myself to, the scene composition, and most of all the fact that I wrote myself into a corner.


Yeah, see this first chapter turned out nothing like I had planned due to me trying to get pages out on a weekly basis and trying to make logical dialogue choices based on what I had already done. Basically the climax of the chapter makes no damn sense with how I ended up doing things.

So... Where does that leave me? Well I can slog through this second chapter and conclusion of this episode and result in a much less compelling start than I had hoped...
OR
I can rewrite and redraw most of it while reusing some panels or pages where they fit.

Honestly I'm leaning towards the latter. It will take some time but I think it will be worth it. Unfortunately I've been busy with other projects and health issues so that's taken a lot of my time but should this work out, I think it would be comparable to editing a film to a much more workable state.

posted by The Scarlet One @ December 24th, 2017, 11:10 pm  -  2 Comments


Reader Comments:

 

Sounds good to me. I look forward to reading as always!

posted by SomeDude (Guest), December 25th, 2017, 7:45 am





 

I'm going to try and write out the next few pages and see how it looks. If it doesn't work out then I may end up re-writing things.

posted by The Scarlet One, December 26th, 2017, 12:03 am



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